Saturday, January 31, 2015

Introducing: Story Starter Saturdays

Today I am excited to announce a new feature here at A Curious Thrill! 

Story Starter Saturdays will take place one Saturday a month. They may be in the form of a picture or an opening sentence, a setting or a sound. Anything! These story starters are intended for everyone, writers and non-writers alike. We can all benefit from stretching our imaginations and our writerly muscles.

Write a poem, a story, a list, a dialogue, a description, or a song. Play the word association game. Set the timer for 10 minutes and do a free write. Create a new character or put yourself in a new situation.  See where the words and images take you. You never know what may happen. Even if an idea isn’t going anywhere to begin with, you may be able to use it some other time. Create a notebook and keep your story starters and scraps of inspiration for later reference.

Now, without further ado, here’s your first prompt:



NOW GO!


Need some help?

Take some time to really study the picture. Search out those tiny details that you missed the first time. What do they tell you? What don’t they tell you?

Where did this bottle come from? Where is it now? Who sent it? Who received it?

What does the paper inside say? What do you notice about the water, the sand, the bottle?


Have fun! Share your first line or what approach you took in the comments below!

Friday, January 16, 2015

Draven's Light Cover Reveal

Today is a very special day as I have the delightful honor of participating in the cover reveal for Anne Elisabeth Stengl’s forthcoming novella and Tale of Goldstone Wood, Draven’s Light. The treats in store include a beautiful and haunting cover, an intriguing storyline, and a thrilling excerpt from the novella. And don’t forget to enter for your chance to win!




In the Darkness of the Pit
The Light Shines Brightest

Drums summon the chieftain's powerful son to slay a man in cold blood and thereby earn his place among the warriors. But instead of glory, he earns the name Draven, "Coward." When the men of his tribe march off to war, Draven remains behind with the women and his shame. Only fearless but crippled Ita values her brother's honor.

The warriors return from battle victorious yet trailing a curse in their wake. One by one the strong and the weak of the tribe fall prey to an illness of supernatural power. The secret source of this evil can be found and destroyed by only the bravest heart.

But when the curse attacks the one Draven loves most, can this coward find the courage he needs to face the darkness?

Coming May 25, 2015



ANNE ELISABETH STENGL makes her home in North Carolina, where she lives with her husband, Rohan, a kindle of kitties, and one long-suffering dog. When she’s not writing, she enjoys Shakespeare, opera, and tea, and practices piano, painting, and pastry baking. She is the author of the critically-acclaimed Tales of Goldstone Wood. Her novel Starflower was awarded the 2013 Clive Staples Award, and her novels Heartless, Veiled Rose, and Dragonwitch have each been honored with a Christy Award.
To learn more about Anne Elisabeth Stengl and her books visit: www.AnneElisabethStengl.blogspot.com






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Excerpt from
DRAVEN’S LIGHT
By Anne Elisabeth Stengl
(coming May 25, 2015)


He heard the drums in his dreams, distant but drawing ever nearer. He had heard them before and wondered if the time of his manhood had come. But with the approach of dawn, the drums always faded away and he woke to the world still a child. Still a boy.

But this night, the distant drums were louder, stronger. Somehow he knew they were not concocted of his sleeping fancy. No, even as he slept he knew these were real drums, and he recognized the beat: The beat of death. The beat of blood.

The beat of a man’s heart.

He woke with a start, his leg throbbing where it had just been kicked. It was not the sort of awakening he had longed for these last two years and more. He glared from his bed up into the face of his sister, who stood above him, balancing her weight on a stout forked branch tucked under her left shoulder.

“Ita,” the boy growled, “what are you doing here? Go back to the women’s hut!”

His sister made a face at him, but he saw, even by the moonlight streaming through cracks in the thatch above, that her eyes were very round and solemn. Only then did he notice that the drumbeats of his dream were indeed still booming deep in the woods beyond the village fires. He sat up then, his heart thudding its own thunderous pace.

“A prisoner,” Ita said, shifting her branch so that she might turn toward the door. “The drums speak of a prisoner. They’re bringing him even now.” She flashed a smile down at him, though it was so tense with anxiety it could hardly be counted a smile at all. “Gaho, your name!”

The boy was up and out of his bed in a moment, reaching for a tunic and belt. His sister hobbled back along the wall but did not leave, though he wished she would. He wished she would allow him these few moments before the drums arrived in the village. The drums that beat of one man’s death . . . and one man’s birth.

His name was Gaho. But by the coming of dawn, if the drums’ promise was true, he would be born again in blood and bear a new name.

Hands shaking with what he desperately hoped wasn’t fear, he tightened his belt and searched the room for his sickle blade. He saw the bone handle, white in the moonlight, protruding from beneath his bed pile, and swiftly took it up. The bronze gleamed dully, like the carnivorous tooth of an ancient beast.

A shudder ran through his sister’s body. Gaho, sensing her distress, turned to her. She grasped her supporting branch hard, and the smile was gone from her face. “Gaho,” she said, “will you do it?”

“I will,” said Gaho, his voice strong with mounting excitement.

But Ita reached out to him suddenly, catching his weapon hand just above the wrist. “I will lose you,” she said. “My brother . . . I will lose you!”

“You will not. You will lose only Gaho,” said the boy, shaking her off, gently, for she was not strong. Without another word, he ducked through the door of his small hut—one he had built for himself but a year before in anticipation of his coming manhood—and stood in the darkness of Rannul Village, eyes instinctively turning to the few campfires burning. The drums were very near now, and he could see the shadows of waking villagers moving about the fires, building up the flames in preparation for what must surely follow. He felt eyes he could not see turning to his hut, turning to him. He felt the question each pair of eyes asked in silent curiosity: Will it be tonight?

Tonight or no night.

Grasping the hilt of his weapon with both hands, Gaho strode to the dusty village center, which was beaten down into hard, packed earth from years of meetings and matches of strength held in this same spot. Tall pillars of aged wood ringed this circle, and women hastened to these, bearing torches which they fit into hollowed-out slots in each pillar. Soon the village center was bright as noonday, but with harsh red light appropriate for coming events.

Gaho stood in the center of that light, his heart ramming in his throat though his face was a stoic mask. All the waking village was gathered now, men, women, and children, standing just beyond the circle, watching him.

The drums came up from the river, pounding in time to the tramp of warriors’ feet. Then the warriors themselves were illuminated by the ringing torches, their faces anointed in blood, their heads helmed with bone and bronze, their shoulders covered in hides of bear, wolf, and boar. Ten men carried tight skin drums, beating them with their fists. They entered the center first, standing each beneath one of the ringing pillars. Other warriors followed them, filling in the gaps between.

Then the chieftain, mighty Gaher, appeared. He carried his heavy crescent ax in one hand, and Gaho saw that blood stained its edge—indeed, blood spattered the blade from tip to hilt and covered the whole of the chieftain’s fist. Gaher strode into the circle, and the boy saw more blood in his beard. But he also saw the bright, wolfish smile and knew for certain that his sister had been correct. The night of naming had come.

“My son,” said the chief, saluting Gaho with upraised weapon.

“My father,” said Gaho, raising his sickle blade in return.

 “Are you ready this night to die and live again?” asked the chief. His voice carried through the shadows, and every one of the tribe heard it, and any and all listening beasts of forests and fields surrounding. “Are you ready this night for the spilling of blood that must flow before life may begin?”

Gaho drew a deep breath, putting all the strength of his spirit into his answer. “I am ready, Father.”

Gaher’s smile grew, the torchlight flashing red upon his sharpened canines. He turned then and motioned to the darkness beyond the torchlight.

The sacrifice was brought forward.


Thank you for sharing this preview with us, Anne Elisabeth! May cannot come soon enough. 

Saturday, November 8, 2014

Piper's Moon - Part Two

Wondering what will become of Absalom, Hanne, and baby Liesl? Here is the conclusion of “Piper’s Moon.” If you missed the first installment, you can catch up here.

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Piper’s Moon
Part Two

Nothing in Hanne’s previous tirade could have been more horrible. Absalom’s heart crashed like a boulder into his stomach; his chest seemed to cave inward until it had squeezed every bit of air from his lungs. He had sworn years ago never to uncover those memories, never to let them once again romp through his mind wreaking havoc as they went. But the memories, he reminded himself, had not stayed memories.

The girl waited. She looked younger than ever now, Absalom thought. Hardly more than a child herself. How could she understand? She would call him a liar at best, declare him a lunatic at worst. Regardless, if he told her she would never let him come near Liesl, much less allow him to save the child. Exhausted, Absalom sank into a rickety chair, rested his elbows upon the table, and covered his face with his broad hands. “It’s my fault.”

He did not have to see to sense how Hanne shifted away from him, readjusting her hold on the baby in protection. “What is?” she asked, but Absalom did not doubt that she knew quite well what he meant.

Absalom hadn’t realized how his hands still shook. But now he did, with them pressed over his forehead, his large and calloused fingers upraising his grey-tinted hair. “I should—should have stopped him. I should have killed him when I had the chance.” He looked up and found that Hanne sat across from him, fear shining in her eyes. The already sparse light in the room had dimmed. The candle flames that only moments ago danced on their wicks now seemed to have collapsed in upon themselves. Shrinking away from him, as anyone should.

“Who is coming for Liesl?” Hanne asked again, her voice strangely calm

He could sit still not longer. Not under Hanne’s gaze. Absalom started upward and his turbulent motion upset the chair, sending it clattering backward. They both jumped. When he had caught his breath again, Absalom began. “He is the piper. Long ago I knew him,” he said, waving his hand through the still air. “It was a different time, but I knew what he had become. Yet I did nothing. So you see that I am to blame.

“This piper came in the night. He played his tune and wove his magic. You cannot hear the tune that he plays unless he wants you to hear it. He plays with enchantments, bending them to serve his purposes.” Absalom paused and gulped for air, but it tasted too thick, swelling until his mouth and lungs ached as though filled with cotton. “But he probed too far, incurred a debt, and so became enslaved to the magic. He turned on all of us, everyone he knew. His desperation soon turned to madness. I tried to defy him, but he had grown too strong. He defeated all but one—my father. Then the piper went away. Foolishly, I thought he was gone forever. I had hoped that he had forgotten me as I tried to forget him.”

Absalom paused before the door. How thin the wood of the door and the plaster of the walls seemed all of a sudden. How very little lay between him and anything that might wait in the night. He found it hard to swallow. “But he’s back now. He’s back and he’s trying to pay his debt. Who know what becomes of the one’s he takes?” He passed his hand over his eyes. “I’m never going to see my children again. But at least I can give Liesl a chance. Please, let me save her, Hanne.”

The girl stared in the wavering candle flame. “How?”

Leaning against the table, Absalom lowered his voice. “Only one man an protect your daughter now. I can take you; I have made arrangements, but we can’t delay any longer.”

“Because the piper is coming?”

Absalom nodded, and then moved to stand beside Hanne. “Liesl was born under the moon’s blessing. That is why he missed her, but he would never leave behind so blessed a child.”

She chuckled. “Blessed?” Hanne blinked through glassy eyes at Absalom. “She has no father and I can give her nothing, yet you call her blessed.” She smiled and gently trailed a slender finger over the fuzzy tufts of hair on the child’s head. Then, in a quivering voice, she said, “It is the only way?”

“Yes.”

The baby stretched in her sleep and the mother smiled fondly. “Then I suppose we should leave,” Hanne said and her voice caught.

***
They took the north road. Absalom pushed them at a swift pace until they had reached the cover of the trees and the village fell out of sight. Hanne moved like a phantom, clutching the bundled babe against her breast and never once turning to glance back. Whenever the child waked and whimpered, Hanne would shush gently and sing softly a lullaby. As they went along, Absalom listened closely to the air, searching for a trace of pipesong. The forest, too, listened. No breeze moved to stir the air or rustle the leaves.

The moon slid across the vaulted sky. They followed the road for miles, but at last they turned away, into the heart of the forest. To Hanne they seemed to be striking out blindly. Dry leaves and bits of branches and needles that the trees had cast aside crunched beneath even the girl’s slight tread. Absalom, however, moved without a sound and seemed to follow some hidden path.

“Absalom,” Hanne whispered uncertainly.

He halted and held up a hand. “Shhh. Listen.”


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Hanne clamped her mouth shut and her heart banged against her ribs. She did her best to cover Liesl’s ears. She listened for the music that Absalom had warned her about, but heard nothing. Only crickets and the distant trickle of water. Absalom straightened and hurriedly guided Hanne onward. Soon they emerged into a clearing. In the dim moonlight Hanne could just make out a glassy pond and a tripping stream that lead out of it and disappeared into the forest. Dried leaves collected between the moss-blanketed stones that lined the stream. A large cottage stood just beyond the pond, ancient trees soaring upwards behind it.

An aged man with a patchy grey beard, thinning hair, and a face full of wrinkles greeted them at the door. “Absalom,” the old man nodded, and then smiled at Hanne.

“Hello, Father,” Absalom said, and his voice fell away under the weight of weariness.

Hanne’s heart had begun to thud ominously. She tightened her grip on the bundle in her arms so that Liesl squirmed. The interior of the cottage was dim yet friendly. A fire crackled on the hearth and sweet-smelling bunches of herbs hung suspended from the ceiling. Hanne blinked quickly to clear her eyes. In a corner a shadowed staircase rose to the upper level. It seemed a nice enough place. Far better than she might provide. Hanne stroked Liesl’s cheek. The old man, who said his name was Anaias, smiled softly at her and offered a cup of tea. She shook her head and swallowed. Her mouth felt gritty like sand, but she couldn’t think of eating or drinking anything at this moment.

“May I?” the old man asked and reached out a hand to stroke Liesl’s downy head. “Such a beautiful child,” he murmured. “She is like you. Very like you.”

Looking into Anaias’ bright, old eyes, Hanne knew that he meant it. She tried to hold back the welling tears, but they rebelled, slipping down her cheeks. “You will love her?” she asked.

“Like my own flesh.”

“You will tell her about me?”

“Of course.”

“We cannot stay long,” Absalom offered. Hanne bent over Liesl and sobbed quietly.

“Please,” she gasped and then could speak no more.

“Take as much time as you need, my dear,” Anaias agreed. Then he stepped toward his son and the two of them went out of the house.

***
Absalom stood with hands clasped behind his back, staring into the deep, reflective blue of the pool.

“So it has begun,” Anaias said, coming to stand beside him. “We knew someday it—he—would come back.”

“But not like this, Father, I never thought—” Absalom rubbed his broad hand through his hair and over his face. “He took Maria and David.” His breath came long and hard. “If I could get near enough, I would wring his neck like he has wrung everything from me.”

“We may yet see them again. It is not impossible.”

“You know as well as I that they belong to him now. They followed his song; they walked in his footsteps.” The night should not rest so still, so quiet, Absalom thought. The stars should not wink, the stream should not gurgle, and the moon should not follow its course. Tonight should not be like any other night. “You will protect the child, won’t you?”

The old man turned his face towards the moon. “So long as I breathe he would not come to this place.”

They both turned at the creak of the opening door. The girl emerged, her eyes clear, her face streaked, and her arms empty. Then addressing Anaias, she said, “My daughter is yours.”

***
When they emerged from the forest the moon hung low in the western sky. Tension prickled across Absalom’s skin as he noted its size. It was huge and luminous. Obese. In contrast the surrounding sky bore a green tint, hovering over the deeper shadowed green of the fields, the ravine, and the forest. When they reached the center of the stone bridge’s span he heard it at last. Pipesong. Absalom froze. And turned. There, atop a ridge and silhouetted against the mammoth, milky moon, danced the piper.

“What’s the matter?” Hanne asked as she stopped beside him, but her words slipped out of the grasp of his consciousness like a mist.

Absalom’s gaze fixated upon the piper, how the black shape of his body twisted and leaped and frolicked. As if he had not just snatched away the lives of an entire town. As if Maria and David slumbered safely in their beds. As if he had never done a thing to Absalom.

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Absalom’s hands folded into fists; his muscles tightened. It was not so far a distance. He could see the path would take now. Over the edge of the bridge and the short drop into the ravine. Charging through the underbrush would be no difficulty, not with his eyes focused on the piper. Up, up, up the ridge he would plow. He would snatch that foul, enchanted pipe away from the piper’s lips. The tiny carved fingers on the side would call at him in their lilting voices, but their words would have no sway over him. Not this time. He would crush it until only splintered shards remained.

Then he would turn to the piper. Absalom would wait until the piper’s cerulean eyes glimmered with recognition. How he would relish that moment. He would stretch out his hands, and they would wrap around the piper’s neck. It would be no trouble; Absalom had always been the larger of the two. No magic would save the piper this time. No magic, not even the powerful enchantments of years long ago, could fend Absalom off now, not when the piper had Maria and David and threatened little Liesl. He wouldn’t stop until the piper’s body lay limp upon that very ridge where he now danced.

“Absalom?” Hanne’s prodding voice scattered the image.

Absalom blinked. When he looked again it had all changed. The moon was of an ordinary size, the sky velvet midnight not green, and the ridge empty. No sign of the piper. A ragged breath slipped past Absalom’s lips and sawed at the air.

“What’s the matter? What do you see?”

“Nothing,” Absalom finally replied and turned away towards home.

The gold of dawn edged the horizon when Absalom entered the house. Already the reminders of the angel’s visit had begun to wear away. He couldn’t quite decide which was worse. Absalom had hardly removed his boots before he stretched across his bed, slowly so as not to wake his slumbering wife and suddenly aware of his exhaustion. As he lay there, watching the currents of darkness float above him, he thought of the piper dancing along the ridge top and of the little girl tucked safely away at the mill, out of the piper’s grasp. Absalom had finally, at least in this small way, beaten him. Deep inside the caverns of his chest, Absalom’s cold, dead heart sputtered. Cough. Then it beat. Once. Now twice, and the slightest hint of hope began to pump through his veins.

Copyright © 2014 Rebecca Fox. All rights reserved.


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